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Level 1 0–7 marks
• There is minimal skill in the use of digital technology or ICT in the evaluation.
• There is minimal understanding of the forms and conventions used in the productions.
• There is minimal understanding of the role and use of new media in various stages of the production.
• There is minimal understanding of the combination of main product and ancillary texts.
• There is minimal understanding of the significance of audience feedback.
• There is minimal skill in choice of form in which to present the evaluation.
• There is minimal ability to communicate.

I'm a bit confused as you're talking about a pop video but is alcoholism really a theme for a pop video? I felt that the song was quite downbeat. You've described your own video but not given examples of real videos that back up your points. In evaluation 2 you've described your video but you were supposed to be explaining how effective the combination of your video and ancillary are! Again you seem to have missed the point slightly in three- you are supposed to show how the audience feedback during the process of making your products, impacted on them. You seem to have repeated the research and planning audience research! Evaluation 4 is a list of the technologies that helped you but it doesn't really look specifically at details of how you used them.

Will 5/20

 Alfie 5/20

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